How Not To Get A Mary Sue by KrissyBKillin, literature
Literature
How Not To Get A Mary Sue
X-x-X-x-X-x-X How to Create A Well balanced Female Lead X-x-X-x-X-x-X
For most people, the problems that people will have with a character is the lack of balance they might have.
Mary-Sues are the most popular characters that exemplify this.
Mary Sues are characters that have more good traits than flaws and therefore look perfect for the audience. That can include all sorta of aspects in the character 'life'.
1) You have over-powered Mary-sues who can defeat any and every opponent and therefore are respected and awed by everyone.
2) Realtionship-Sues who are so much of the woman that every man who meets her is obviously struck with lov
“Kovu, Kovu, Kovu. Scar wasn’t even his father. He just took ‘im in.” Nuka was hanging behind the building smoking a cigarette. The air around him was stale with smoke. Homeless women and men scrounged in garbage cans looking for food. Nuka immediately was happy he had an apartment. He scratched the scraggly hair on his chin. He somehow couldn’t actually grow a full beard so he was stuck with his goatee. He kind of liked it though. Flicking the cigarette into a garbage can he stuck his hands into his pocket and entered the broken down building. He gripped the staircase and walked up four flights of stairs. T
The Simple Character Creator Formula by Spaztique, journal
The Simple Character Creator Formula
This is a copy-paste (with some additions) from my Tumblr blog (http://spaztique.tumblr.com/), but it must be reposted.
Twilight of the Hakurei, the club-wide comic tennis/RP (http://walfasstationwagon.deviantart.com/gallery/41877816), is turning out just as I suspected: AMAZINGLY. However, one thing that really astounds me is how well the character system is working. If you're not familiar, it's simply this:
1. Pick the character's biggest strength that affects other people. Note the key phrase, "that affects other people." For example, "He's really good at cooking," is not a strength: that's just a regular skill that only applies to one a
I'm going to remake it because I didn't really like where it was going so the remake is gonna change the story and theme and I'm going to add more characters plus the personality change.
Sorry guys if I haven't been posting a lot lately because I'm pretty busy with school and I don't have much time for my hobbies and drawing, and since our finals our approaching, I'm gonna be fully loaded for the next few weeks... But I swear I'll be back by March or April .